Nicely done. I'm surprised that I haven't seen this as an official mac advertisement already. I think the apple logo could use some work though. They've made it pretty fancy in the last year or so, with a shine and stuff. That's the only thing that really stuck out to me. Did you render those pages in illustrator or is it a photomanipulation?
A very gorgeous ad! You would have gotten bonus points if you presented it in the apple style, more silver and white than black, but that still doesnt detract from the fact that this is very well done. even if the concept has been done before.
Will this actually be used as an ad? If so great job, I had one of my fake ads for Gibson become real in print, so heres hopin' I see this picture in Wired soon. Cuz having art in a magazine (plus the $600) will get you some sweet ass, haha~